New England SCBWI – Bruce Coville

Bruce Coville gave the Saturday keynote at the New England SCBWI Conference last weekend. If ever you have the opportunity to hear this man speak, do it. I was much too enthralled in his presentation to take notes, but I was intrigued by this exercise he suggested:

Divide a piece of paper into six squares and write everything you can remember about each of your years in elementary school. Who was your teacher? What did the room look like? Who were the people around you? Etc. Etc.

This idea has been niggling at me all week. I am heavy into research reading for two projects at the moment, awaiting critiques of a third, and it seems like a good time to play. And so I spent this morning remembering my childhood. Mr. Coville was right, it is simply AMAZING what an exercise like this will dig up.

Go on, give it a try.

I’ve pasted my elementary revelations behind the cut.

Grade 1
I don’t remember much about first grade. I cannot remember the school, the classroom, or the teacher. I have vague memories of a rectangular cardboard box with a lid and of the hundreds of oaktag letter squares inside; we used them to make words on our desktops. I can see the letters and the box and the desktop. Everything else is blurry and outside the frame of that desktop.

Special note: My mother died during my kindergarten year and I was, as you might imagine, confused for a very long time. Perhaps my Grade 1 memories were lost in the many transitions I was going through?

Grade 2
Lafayette School, Mrs. Ricci
Mrs. Ricci was young and beautiful. She had long, dark hair and coppery skin. She wore a lot of make-up and beautiful gold jewelry: rings, bracelets, earrings, necklaces. The Hawaiian festival was the highlight of the year. There were grass skirts and leis and I drank coconut milk for the first time. I remember a spelling competition in which Mrs. Ricci asked us to spell the word WEDNESDAY. One after another, we second graders trudged to her desk, wrote our guess on a piece of paper, and were sent back to our seats. And then I had the marvelous idea of looking at the wall calendar on my way back to my desk. I raised my hand for a second chance and nailed it. I don’t recall being found out, but I wonder now if Mrs. Ricci knew my secret.

Grade 3
Lafayette School, Mrs. Hurley
Mrs. Hurely was older. She looked and dressed like my grandmother … short gray hair, no-nonsense polyester pants suits. I remember a book report on Judy Blume’s BLUBBER. My copy of the book was red and perfect and wrapped in library cellophane. I was nervous about the report; I was passionate about the book.

Grade 4
Lafayette School, Mr. Kelleher
Mr. Kelleher was handsome and I remember feeling shy whenever I was near him. I was being raised in a house of women (just me, my sister and my aunt); handsome young men were a novelty. Mr. Kelleher had the added intrigue of being a musician. He played his guitar in our classroom weekly and he taught us the words to “Yellow Submarine”. He also taught us to write in cursive, and I remember very clearly the cursive alphabet displayed on the classroom walls. It stretched around a corner, and the traditional horizontal lines of penmanship paper—a solid upper and lower line and a middle one hatched to indicate the proper place to begin and end lowercase letters—were white on green. I remember the day Mr. Kelleher corrected my lowercase p’s because I had made the opening stroke extend all the way to the tippy-top line, and I remember finding my nerve and pointing out to him that I had drawn my p’s exactly the way they were drawn on that green cardboard guide. “I stand corrected,” he told me, and I sang extra-loud that day.

Special note: Mr. Kelleher is now Johnny the K, a children’s entertainer visiting schools and spreading “music with a message” across the land. In a fabulous stroke of good fortune, he visited my sons’ elementary school last fall and I was able to see him touch the lives of a second generation of my family. How cool is that?

Grade 4
Hamilton School, Mrs. Doherty
We moved during my fourth grade school year: same town, new school. My knees were knobbed and scabbed and I thought they looked funny between my girly white ankle socks and my green corduroy jumper dress. I prayed the children couldn’t see them as I stood at the front of the room—Mrs. Doherty’s arm around my shoulder—suffering through my introduction. My seat was the last one in the second row, right next to Joseph Prezioso and not at all close enough to the girl with the brown hair and the dungarees who chatted endlessly to everyone about everything. I wanted that girl as a friend even more than I wanted to move back home. Her name was Kelley

Note: Kelley is now Auntie to my three children, I am Auntie to her three children, and I cannot imagine my life without her. And to think I hadn’t wanted to move!

Grade 5
Hamilton School, Mrs. Lodge
It was 1979, and I remember being greeted on the first day of school by a brightly decorated bulletin board that read: “Welcome Class of 1987”. I was immediately worried. We were being welcomed to fifth grade by a teacher who couldn’t get the year right! I marched up to Mrs. Lodge and told her she had mistakenly welcomed the Class of 1979 as the Class of 1987 and I remember she was kind as she explained it all to me. Mrs. Lodge served jury duty that year and missed what seemed like months of the school year. Our substitute was Mrs. Tringali, and she wrote lovely messages to me in my journal. Oh! And there was a States and Capitals Bee. It was a BIG DEAL, held on Friday afternoon in the school cafeteria. Kelley and I studied hard together. We were the last children standing, and I was thrilled about this … right up until the proctor said “North Dakota” and Kelley shouted “Bismark” and I lost the blue ribbon. I was inconsolable. I think Kelley tried to give me her ribbon, which of course made me cry even more. Mrs. Tringali wrote me a lovely consolation in my journal on Monday, and I wrote back passionately about having ruined her weekend. Oh, the drama!

Grade 6
Hamilton School, Mr. Camello
Mr. Camello was comfortable. He was old (to me), short, and kind. He wore suit coats and a tie every day. We kept a tally on the chalkboard recording the number of days US hostages were held in Iran and I remember wondering if the number would ever stop going up. I became a rebel. I invented a Girls Code so that we gals could write notes to each other and rest assured they would not be deciphered by Boy interceptors. I stole the Boys Code Key from John Guerio’s desk (he sat beside me); they never did figure out how we cracked their code. I wrote my name on a desktop … in pencil … and erased it at the end of the day. I had my first crush; his name was Paul DeVito and he was the sweetest boy I had ever met.

Special Note: Paul is the name I gave the sweet protagonist in my WIP. Hmmm …

 

Who Put the B in the Ballyhoo?

WHO PUT THE B IN THE BALLYHOO?
Written and Illustrated by Carlyn Beccia
Houghton Mifflin, 2007

Category: Picture book, Abecedarium

Among the spectacularly talented people I met this weekend in Nashua was Carlyn Beccia, author and illustrator of WHO PUT THE B IN THE BALLYHOO. I have a special interest in this book, because it’s art graced the cover of the Houghton Mifflin Books for Children Spring 2007 Catalog. Since my very first book for children appeared in this catalog, it seemed to me I should have a signed copy of the book. (Honestly, do I not come up with the best excuses to buy books?)

So, I bought a copy of WHO PUT THE B IN THE BALLYHOO?, read it, and immediately bought two more copies. (Christmas gifts. I am already kicking myself for not buying more.) It is a special book, full of intriguing circus trivia (like the origins of the phrase “Hold your horses!”, the definition of ballyhoo, the skinny on fleas, and the inspiration for Uncle Sam) and art celebrating the classic performers (Uno—The Serpent Queen, Captain Costentenus—The Human Art Gallery, Ravishing Ruth—The Fat Lady). Text that educates, art that enchants … what more can one ask from an ABC book?

I met Carlyn at the Saturday signing, and she is as charming as her debut picture book. She inscribed my copy (“To the Amazing and Spectacular Loree!”) and we had a lovely chat about the joys of being Houghton authors. Just one of many moments that made this New England SCBWI Conference one to remember.

 

New England SCBWI – Stephen Fraser

I’m back from the New England SCBWI Conference, and I have so much to share. I’m going to take it slow, though, so check back often this week and next to hear about the people I met, the things I learned and, of course, the books I bought.

The conference opened on Friday afternoon with a keynote address by Stephen Fraser, an agent at The Jennifer DeChiara Literary Agency. His overall message was comforting: a good manuscript will find a home. So just relax, make the manuscript sing, and Believe. Overly simple? Maybe. But it is an approach that appeals to me, and it is ever so much easier than sending your manuscript out with a box of caterpillar-shaped cookies.

Mr. Fraser also suggested writers perfect an “elevator pitch” for every manuscript. Suppose you were to find yourself alone with your dream editor in an elevator of your favorite publishing house. You have two minutes—the time it will take to travel from her fourteenth floor office to the lobby—to get her interested in your work. What would you say? You are going for short, succinct and utterly compelling, a single sentence that will entice your dream editor to acquire your manuscript on the spot … or at least ask to see it exclusively.

I think this is good advice, and I gave it a whirl.

(I tried to hide my “giving it a whirl” bit behind a handy LJ cut, but couldn’t make it work. If you care to read a sample elevator pitch read on. If you don’t skip to the next few paragraphs!

THE MAD MARCH is a picture book biography that introduces readers to the French entomologist Jean-Henri Fabre through the lens of some of the most vivid and accessible experiments ever conducted on insects. Readers of any age or science background will marvel at the mad march of the Fabre’s pine processionary caterpillars.

Okay, that’s two sentences, and it reads a little stiff. But in the elevator I could loosen the language a bit, flail my hands, use pens to demonstrate the amazing caterpillar experiments. The point is that this exercise forced me to focus my thoughts on the book. What is it really about? Why is it going to be important to readers? Why should an editor care about it?

Go on, try it. Write your elevator pitches. It’ll be good for you.)

Finally, Fraser recommended two books to the writers and illustrators in attendance:

THE SOUND ON THE PAGE, by Ben Yagoda

and

READING LIKE A WRITER, by Francine Prose

I’ve read the Prose book and agree it is worthy. Has anyone out there read the Yagoda title? Do you recommend it?

 

Before I go …

Oh! I have so much to tell you, but I have got to run. The New England SCBWI Spring Conference starts at noon and I am not even packed yet. Here is the abbreviated report:

1. I completed a draft of my WIP and have sent it off to my trusted readers. Phew!

2. I met Robie Harris at dinner last night, and she was lovely and kind and encouraging. Her presentation afterward inspired me to continue striving to write HONEST books for kids.

3. I finished reading TIPS ON HAVING A GAY (ex) BOYFRIEND, by Carrie Jones, and I highly recommend this hot-off-the-presses YA title by an up-and-coming YA author. I SO hope to run into her this weekend so she can sign my book.

Can you see why I am not packed yet?

More soon …

 

Tracking Trash in Audubon Magazine

Julie Leibach reviewed TRACKING TRASH for the May/June 2007 issue of Audubon magazine!

In addition to TRACKING TRASH, Ms. Leibach’s “Nature Books for Kids” column included reviews of THE TALE OF PALE MALE, written and illustrated by Jeanette Winter (this one was a hit in the Burns house), EXTREME ANIMALS, written by Nicola Davies and illustrated by Neal Layton, and WHY ARE THE ICE CAPS MELTING, written by Anne Rockwell and illustrated by Paul Meisel.

 

Chicky Chicky Chook Chook

CHICKY CHICKY CHOOK CHOOK
By Cathy MacLennan
Boxer Books, 2007

Category: Picture book

Remember the pile of birthday books for my soon-to-be-two niece? I needed a fifth and you all gave me some great suggestions. Thank you, thank you. All of them are on my list and several will surely be in her book piles in years to come. But I came across CHICKY CHICKY CHOOK CHOOK this week and I simply couldn’t resist.

“Chicky, chicky, chook chook.
Chick, chick chick.

Chicky, chicky, chook chook,
Peck … peck … pick.”

Oh, yes. I can imagine our Little Miss rollicking to this one. Yes. Yes. Yes. The illustrations, like the onomatopoeic text, are jaunty and fun. Rhythm, art, a simple and relevant plot … this is pure read-aloud fun for the toddler set, and just what I needed to round out the 2007 Birthday Booklist.

 

Happy Birth Day!

HAPPY BIRTH DAY!
By Robie H. Harris
Illustrated by Michael Emberley
Candlewick Press, 1996

Category: Picture book

There are weeks when being a writer is hard. Like last week, when I had four projects screaming for attention, three children screaming for attention, and not enough time to do any of them justice. Blech.

And then there are weeks like this one. My writing buddies have helped me focus my project load and I am making good progress on the one needing the most attention. (Thank you, Eric and Liza!) This afternoon I had my first ever television interview and I feel good about how it went. Somehow I have an abundance of alone time on my schedule this week and I might—just might—finish the aforementioned project before leaving for the New England SCBWI Spring Conference in Nashua on Friday. As if all this weren’t enough excitement, I also get to meet Robie Harris on Thursday!

Could the week get any better?

Not surprisingly, I have been exploring Robie’s books all week; I am utterly smitten with HAPPY BIRTH DAY! It is the intimate story of one baby’s birth, and it was impossible for me to read it and not remember the birth days of my own three children. Michael Emberley’s illustrations are lovely and help make HAPPY BIRTH DAY!—like all the books by this author/illustrator team—an accurate and compelling resource for children who want to know a little bit more about the day they were born.

If you live near Holden, Massachusetts, you should stop by and hear Robie speak on Thursday (details below). If you are too far away, check back for a recap of the event on my blog later in the week. And in the meanwhile, treat yourself to one or two of Robie Harris’s books. You deserve a treat, don’t you?

The Gale Free Library presents:

Robie Harris
Thursday, May 17, 6:30pm
Holden Senior Center
1130 Main Street
Holden, MA 01520

 

The Creation

THE CREATION, AN APPEAL TO SAVE LIFE ON EARTH
By E.O. Wilson
W.W. Norton & Company, 2007

Category: Adult Non-fiction

I am reading a lot of non-fiction these days. It started out as an Earth Day thing … I had several environmentally-themed books I had been wanting to read, and Earth Day seemed a good reason to start in on them. And I haven’t been able to stop.

Anyhoo …

Edward O. Wilson has a simple idea. Instead of focusing on the differences between those of us who praise reason and those of us who praise religion, why not focus on that which we hold in common: a dependence on Earth’s biodiversity. Wilson argues that rallying around one inescapable truth—that we humans have a profound impact our environment—will not only breed respect and understanding, but also help to save life on earth.

I applaud Wilson’s idea and recommend his book to anyone interested in a naturalist’s view of the state of our planet. But there were other reasons the book fascinated me. It is chock full of information that shocked my sense of magnitude. For example, did you know that:

“It is mathematically possible to log-stack all the people on Earth into a single block of one cubic mile and lower them out of sight in a remote part of the Grand Canyon.”

Clearly I have underestimated the scale of the Grand Canyon. Or perhaps I have overestimated the pervasive-ness of humankind? Does this statement leave anyone else with their mouth hanging open?

I’ll leave you with a final quote from THE CREATION.

“The power of science comes not from scientists but from its method.”

Amen to that.

 

Little Pea

LITTLE PEA
By Amy Krouse Rosenthal
Illustrated by
Jen Corace
Chronicle Books, 2005

Category: Picture book

My niece turns two this month, and the kids and I have been selecting her birthday books. Okay, well, I guess I have been selecting her books. Everyone else is supremely busy with school and baseball and T-ball and spring. All of which is fine by me, of course, because picking books is my thing.

I read LITTLE PEA when it first came out, and it has become one of my favorite toddler gift books. It is an irresistible concept … Little Pea must finish his dinner before getting dessert. Mama Pea and Papa Pea insist. (Sound familiar?) Yuck! Blech! Plck! Pleh! Little Pea chokes down his five bites, and is rewarded with his favorite desert. But Rosenthal and Corace have turned the familiar dinner time battle inside out, and the result is a round, green chuckle-fest for all ages. I’d love to tell you more, but I can’t bear to spoil the surprise. Read it for yourself!

The other titles in our birthday pile?

ESTELLE TAKES A BATH, written by Jill Esbaum and illustrated by Mary Newell DePalma, and which I have mentioned before. (I cannot wait to see my brother-in-law’s reaction. Will he giggle? Will he blush?)

A GOOD DAY, written and illustrated by Kevin Henkes. Simple, beautiful, perfect. Sigh.

SCAREDY SQUIRREL, the 2007 Cybils award winner in the picture book category, written and illustrated by Melanie Watt. More giggles.

I’d like to add one more book. Thoughts? Ideas? Suggestions? Bring them on! And quickly, please, because the big day is just around the bend.